I listened to "dance song" The guitar part that starts the verse section is really cool ,It reminds me of early YES. :-}
J's comment about the kick is right on IMO. In fact, the snare sounds a little tubby to me too. The guitars are just a little loud but, all in all, it sounds good. There is a ton of energy here.
Part of the deal might be how you are monitoring and that's a HUGE subject.. Ain't it fun though?..:-}