uuuuuhhhhhhhh......aren't all mixes artistic statements? isn't all mastering subjective?
not really sure what you're asking. it seems like you're saying you think the mix sucks and you're trying to be polite about it. that's cool. it sounds good to me, but what do i know. if you think it sucks and that you can make it not suck by twisting knobs x, y, and z, then have at it.