Ok , I finally listened to all of them. As this is highly subjective please don't take any comment too seriously. I'll try to keep it short and to the point. Also , having reviewed this many entries and judging by the how little feedback has been received so far , may I suggest that to make the discussion easier the participants be split into groups. Reviewing 10 to 15 entries at a time would be more manageable.
JOBU - like arrangement , too much reverb , didn't tune vox , some timing issues remain , don't like the sudden end
Mkane - too much reverb , too much compression , too much delay , scooped mids , missed vocal tuning , timing issues remain , like reverb on acoustic gtr but too much of it
YZ - file is clipped , overall is a bit dark , too much reverb , timing issues remain , rhodes alone is a bit weird but great entrance with gtrs after wards , missed tuning vox , vocal doubling a little loud and rough sounding
NelsonL - background noise (probably due to the distortion) , vox too loud , didn't like the type of distortion used , like fx on rhodes , too much reverb , missed tuning vox
sstillwell - too much fx , don't like intro , timing issues remain , missed tuning vox , don't like outro
iCombs - background noise , too much fx , timing issues remain , missed tuning vox , too much compression , breaths on vocal are too loud
eh91311 - too much reverb , don't like arragement , timing issues remain , bass shy , missed tuning vox , click track bleed
Tricklecharge - interesting intro but a bit long , like the overall mix idea but too much fx , missed tuning vox , don't like the lo-fi fx used
Electric_Warrior - weird spike on one snare hit , background noise , vox too loud , timing issues not so bothersome on this one , too much reverb on drums , snare's image off center
colinl - background noise , too much reverb , too much compression , timing issues remain , like overall idea , missed tuning vox
Osumosan03 - file clipped , background noise , extreme compression , overall a bit dark , cymbals too bright , missed tuning vox , too much fx on vox makes it sound distant , click track bleed , compressor breathing
HissSound - vox a bit loud , rhodes a bit low , some phase issues remain , timing issues remain but no so bothersome , missed tuning vox , good mix I like it
singsing - too much compression , don't like the fx on vox , missed vox tuning , added distortion to gtrs? , good balance , timing issues remain but no so bothersome , don't like eq on acoustic gtr , like outro idea but not the fx used quality wise (a bit too grainy)
grantrichard - file is clipped , don't like drum sounds , too much reverb on vox , don't like arrangement , good balance
Billybehdaz - like vox and bass , like arrangement , in general I like it
MGT - bass heavy , vox too compressed , missed tuning vox , timing issues remain
MGAudio - strange little thump at files beginning (king of like a snare's reverb return or a mistrigered snare sample) , too much reverb on drums , missed tuning vox , didn't like delay on acoustic gtr
Firefly - I like it , vox a bit loud , timing issues remain , missed tuning vox , good balance , don't like acoustic gtr panning , in general a good approach
JasonThompson - hi-hat a bit bright , off center snare , gtrs a bit low , mistrigered samples? , missed tuning vox , offcenter vox , overall good
DCombs - background noise , too much fx , gtr low , timing issues remain , missed vox tuning , too much compression on vox
slash - don't like drum sound , don't like distortion on bass , vox too loud , missed tuning vox , like how you rided rhodes , vox drops in volume at outro , overall ok but less processing would be better , there are phase issues with drums' overheads
STARSCREAM2010 - file is clipped , background noise , hi-hat loud , vox sounds dull , too much compression , excess energy on kick below 50hz , like handling of rhodes and gtrs
TheDan - too much bass , timing issues remain , too much compression (buss compression?) , missed tuning vox , interesting fx on rhodes , too much fx on electric gtrs
JonahAKort - piano is a bit thin sounding , too much distortion on bass , used amp simulation on bass? , too much reverb on vox , low freq plop on vox , don't like delay used on piano , missed vox tuning , like the muting of piano and which I had thought of that , don't like delay on acoustic gtr , the vox reverb at end I like but there is a bit too much of it
RwApeMix - background noise , very nice arrangement ideas , snare a bit loud , did not care for radio fx on vocal at outro , overall I like this version
AdamMiller - file is clipped , background noise with a pronounced spike at 15.4khz (dither?) , interesting snare sound , bass a tad loud , too much compression , center is a bit crowded
TJM - didn't like intro , maybe if reversed , too much compression with pumping breathing and distortion , low end out of control , missed tuning vox , background noise probably because of massive compression
Fiasco - file is clipped , dither noise? , timing issues remain , missed the tuning vox , did not care for vocal fx at outro