J-Texas:
There seems to be a massive buildup in the 150-300 range. Not sure if this was a decision or a monitoring issue. It's not exactly "muddy" but it is unnatural sounding.
The bass is out of tune. Because of the overall band-limited sound, it almost sounds like an acoustic bass through an amp. It's actually kind of nice that way as a sound, but it doesn't really work for me overall.
The vocal is nice and present, but perhaps a tad low. It's tough for me to tell against all that low-mid.
I like the guitars quite a bit. They're nice and crunchy without being overbearing.
The do-yas'a seem to be balanced well, but they are super dry and seem to be sticking out a bit as a result. I'd like them a bit more tucked in, and part of the groove.
The vocal seems to be getting really buried now in the third verse after the lead guitar comes in.
After the second chorus, there doesn't seem to be anything going on in the left channel any more. It loses balance for me a bit.
Ha! I REALLY like the tiny break turnaround in the final do-ya's! That just never occurred to me. It works really well. Nice.
Nice smooth fade that kicks off just before the phrase turnaround.
Overall Impressions:
Other than the odd frequency build up in the low mids, I think things are mostly level balanced fairly well. There are a few things that stick out a bit here and there, but nothing huge. The bass tuning just plain bugs the crap outta me, I'm afraid.
Regarding the delayed vocal... There are places where it works - where it could be deliberate. These moments are really nice, and offer a refreshing take on the song. They are however, far more rare than I think you may realize. For the most part, there just isn't any rhythmic relationship whatsoever between the vocal and the track.
I do tons of theater, and every so often (typically during a "review" type show), I'll run into has-been, also-ran singers who perpetually sing w_a_a_y behind the beat like this. They are generally older, and when pressed on the issue will screw their noses into the air and declare petulantly they are being "artistic". They're not. They just suck. I hate them. 'Nuff said.