These are my notes. Just the things that came to mind when listening.
A lack of groove makes me wanna turn music off, to me it's worse than scratching fingernails on a chalkboard. The mixes where it’s really annoying are labelled LOG: “Lack Of Groove”
Greg Dixon
Sounds good. LOG. Vocal could be louder. Chorus could use more lift.
iCombs
Nice vox, drums are a little thin. LOG. There's no lift in the chorus.
Garret
Looks like you messed up the samplerate. I like the arrangement but it could lift off a bit earlier, the overall sound is kinda boxy, drums are weak, the extra git part is nice
Gatino
Why a 48k mp3? Drums lack power. Guitar a bit too loud. I miss the BG vox in the chorus. Leadvocal has some ugly highs as if it’s been de-essed too much but with a too long attack time.
HephaLuemp
LOG. The kick is big but it drags down the song and makes the lack of rhythm very annoying. The sound of the rest is good. I like what you did with the FX tracks.
Judah
The wurlitzer hook could be louder. Drums are distant. Guitar is too big, it masks the rest. LOG
Mark Fasset
Less kick more bass would be nice. Louder backing vocals would lift the chorus more
ScotcH
LOG. Was the guitar that doubles the bass that much out of time? The snare lacks punch. Nice idea to put the bg vox left.
Scott Oliphant
It's not a coherent mix to me. You took the parts in a different direction: distorted drums, clean guitars, very ambient vocal. For me they don't fit together.
SingSing
The mix is very dull (lack of high freqs) accept for the vocal sibilance. I like the intimate feeling it has. The sound reminds me of playing in an overly damped rehearsalstudio.
TLester
Nice and direct as if played in a very small room. LOG
VKorehov
Track is swimming in guitar with delay, it attracks all attention. I think the rest sounds pretty good.
ChrisJ
Bigger and louder drums would be great. Balance between instruments is off.
DConstruction
Why a 48k mp3? The different drumsounds left and right tear the mix in two. Tapedelay on the Wurlitzer is nice. The mix sounds good but the splitted drums give me a headache.
Henchman
great punch in snare, a bit thin though. Nice vocal, too distant in chorus. A little less/shorter reverb would make the track connect more.
Undertow
The drums are amazing, you can get a kick out of everything. The fx Rhodes and the chop guitar could be more present to make the chorus different from the verse
Macmandude
I don't like the compression/distortion, the different instruments have become a single wash of sound.
Rankus
Sounds good, I'd like a little less reverb here an there. You made the snare and guitar bigger than the lead vocal. I'd like to see that the other way around.
Cary
Sounds good. LOG. I like a little less/shorter reverb to make it more direct. The chorus vocals are too soft.
Maxim
Bass is overpowering and makes the mix very thick and sluggish. I like the extra Wurlitzer parts. Snare sounds little boxy. The chorus could be bigger.
Nizzle
LOG. Very big mix. Vocal a bit sibilant, doubling could be duller and softer so it's less distracting. Reverb on Wurlitzer and Chop git is too big it washes away the whole mix. Chorus could be bigger. I Like the racecar fx, what's that? You left in the Rhodes burp.
LouMan
The vocal reverb distracts from the vocal itself. Guitar is very big compared to drums. I don't like the sibilant harsh chorus vocal sound. Lacks kick.
Nick T
The vocal delays are distracting. I like the presence of the drums, too bad they are mono without any stereo room sound, they don't fit the rest. LOG.
J Hall
Very big mix. LOG. Instruments are good separated and still make a whole. A little less compression would have left room for the chorus to be bigger than the verse.
Volthause
LOG. Vocal has sibilance and is low in level mostly because the snare is in it's way. Mix sounds distant and blurred especially the last chorus.
Tom C
Nice to hear a mix that isn't soaked in reverb. Mix is dull, Nice harmonies on vox. Much sibilance on vox. Instruments could be bigger in chorus. Drums and bass are very soft.
Spoon
LOG. Instruments balance is off. Long reverb makes mix blurred.
Nick Evans
Nice and Dry. Good drumsound. Rhodes and Chop guitar are earsplitting loud.
pitzter redfro
It all fits into a nice whole. Chop guitar is too loud.
six wax
LOG. Snare is very big and drums are a bit dull but it works. The snare is too big for the extra reverb in the last chorus though. I like the vibe. Leadvocal stands out very nice and sounds good.
Ok that's it. Don't take it personal, it's just what I would do differently if they were my mixes.
It's nice to hear so many versions of a story.